If that's a serious request, I think I'd make a good guinea pig for you. My wife's a big fan (I bought about ten of the chapbooks for her as you were packing up in the hucksters' room at last year's WorldCon), but I haven't read any of them myself (yet). So if I have any trouble figuring out what's going on, she may be able to help pinpoint where the problem is from a reader's perspective.

I'm also a decent amateur proofreader, and it never hurts to have another pair of eyes that don't know what's supposed to be there look things over!