Chapter Ten: Shan and Priscilla Ride Again

[rolanni]

We have a lot of phone calls and mundane business to take care of tomorrow, so, our busyness is your early chapter!

Please note that, with the posting of this chapter, there are only five more ahead of us.  Do recall that we've been viewing an incomplete work, and it will not end tidily.

Here's your link to Chapter Ten.

Enjoy!

Comments

[amm-me.livejournal.com]

Aaahhhhh! Thanks.

Now we get to some real meat. I had begun almost to think this was a coming-of-age about Gordy.

In your Auctorial Reflections at the stopping point, do youthink you will be able to tell us where you were heading? Before Maine, and Other Stuff, got in the way?

[rolanni.livejournal.com]

Might be; might not. What we have this far is so jumpy, it would need a top-to-bottom rewrite to smooth it out, and see what the hooks are, and which hooks are the most compelling. The problem is that the Universe has gone on, and this story is basically your Neanderthal-found-in-a-glacier.