Date: 2008-07-13 08:49 pm (UTC)
There's nothing wrong with murmuring when the character is murmuring. The problem is when he murmurs to avoid saying, or when the author clearly thinks that she can avoid the "talking head" syndrome of uninterrupted dialogue by coming up with increasingly inventive and unlikely verbs instead of "said," without including any other description or action.
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