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rolanni ([personal profile] rolanni) wrote2008-07-13 04:35 pm

Said-isms

All righty, then.

I just read a reader review of a book (not one of ours) in which the reviewer was bitching and moaning about all the said-isms in the book. People never just said anything, the reviewer complained (um, oops), they whispered, murmured, hissed, cried, mumbled, &c -- and everyone knew that was Just Wrong.

Well, I'm going to 'fess up; I didn't know that it was wrong. And I'm going to go one step farther; "said" is an awfully boring word. Oh, it has its uses, and use it I do. But, honestly, if someone has murmured, why not say so? If she mumbles, or stammers at a certain point, that might, yanno, be a Clue. I'd think a whole page of dialogue broken only by "said" would put me right to sleep. Granted, I could be in a minority here.

So, I have some questions.

The first is, where do you learn that "said-isms" are "wrong?" and how come I never got the memo?

The second is, what are your feelings about "said-isms":

[Poll #1222698]

or -- feel free to discuss in comments.

FWIW

[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com 2008-07-14 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
In Balance of Trade, it appears that there are 885 instances of said, and 86 of murmur.

Brought to you by the word "a" which rarely gets enough notice, but does a stalwart job none the less.

Re: FWIW

[identity profile] katmoonshaker.livejournal.com 2008-07-14 01:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Brava "a"!! You do a good job every time!

Re: FWIW

[identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com 2008-07-15 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
"a" bows, leg extended, hat on chest, with a flourish of the other hand indicating respect and a flicker of the eye through the falling hair indicating amusement :-)