I think you wrote a good story. If that person wanted a different story, he/she is free to right a different story, one with no bad words or unpleasant ideas, or anything else unwanted.
Character and plot are the two things that are most likely to grab me at the beginning of a story. Dialog and setting have been to do so too, but not as often. Bad words don't grab me but I don't object to them being used in ways that are appropriate to the story. Too often they're used gratuitously and that can turn me off pretty quick. I don't think you've ever been guilty of that.
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Date: 2015-01-04 09:00 pm (UTC)Character and plot are the two things that are most likely to grab me at the beginning of a story. Dialog and setting have been to do so too, but not as often. Bad words don't grab me but I don't object to them being used in ways that are appropriate to the story. Too often they're used gratuitously and that can turn me off pretty quick. I don't think you've ever been guilty of that.