Might be; might not. What we have this far is so jumpy, it would need a top-to-bottom rewrite to smooth it out, and see what the hooks are, and which hooks are the most compelling. The problem is that the Universe has gone on, and this story is basically your Neanderthal-found-in-a-glacier.
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Date: 2015-06-29 02:19 pm (UTC)