Sometimes, the Sky is Blue
Tuesday, April 5th, 2005 09:58 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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kinzel avers. We shall See.
So, I didn't finish up those last few pages last night. Hit a point where I think there needs to be ...something more emotionally present. The bane of this book has been flashback, as in -- I'd write a scene describing a pivotal scene in retrospect. Then, next shift, I'd have to go back and write the dern scene, which you'd think I could've done in the first place and saved everybody grief, but -- no. To be fair, I really do think this is the last one. Notice me not saying that it'll be an easy fix.
In other news, Crystal Soldier is apparently now manifesting in B&N brick-and-mortars, which is nice, though one may need to be creative in one's search pattern, as a reader in Hawaii reports that she found her copy in the Military History section. O-kay...
kinzel avers. We shall See.So, I didn't finish up those last few pages last night. Hit a point where I think there needs to be ...something more emotionally present. The bane of this book has been flashback, as in -- I'd write a scene describing a pivotal scene in retrospect. Then, next shift, I'd have to go back and write the dern scene, which you'd think I could've done in the first place and saved everybody grief, but -- no. To be fair, I really do think this is the last one. Notice me not saying that it'll be an easy fix.
In other news, Crystal Soldier is apparently now manifesting in B&N brick-and-mortars, which is nice, though one may need to be creative in one's search pattern, as a reader in Hawaii reports that she found her copy in the Military History section. O-kay...
