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For those who want to discuss Necessity's Child.  Please, out of courtesy for those who are waiting for the dead tree edition, limit your conversation to this topic.  Thank you.

WARNING:  If you don't want the story spoiled, don't read the comments of this post! 

I gave it 5 stars

Date: 2012-10-24 04:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nocal-kathyf.livejournal.com
Wonderful - well worth waiting for, thanks so much. Great new characters, new questions to ponder before the next book. Luckily I put a pot roast in the slow cooker this morning before I knew the ARC copy would be out or the family might not have gotten any dinner tonight.
I did find one reversal in Chapter 31, (79% on Kindle, no page numbers). "Oh yes, and that is enough..." The word "is" was reversed as "si". Thought you might tell Baen. Thanks again for a great story. Kathy

Date: 2012-10-24 12:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sfminou.livejournal.com
You must have a clearer phone line -- my copy is FULL of hashed text. Maybe I'll try downloading it again -- Baen makes that easy, once you've bought it.
Only a strong desire to know what's happening kept me plowing through. The story is great, and I love the story-telling device of making us see the plot through such very different eyes. I had to go back and re-read the beginning once I realized where we were. Somehow, I thought "George" was a non-Liaden story! LOL

Date: 2012-10-24 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cailleuch.livejournal.com
Mine was clean so perhaps you need new download. Clean defined as a few typos but no big problems -- what you would expect from an eArc.

Time Frame and Characters

Date: 2012-10-24 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starthorn.livejournal.com
Wonderful! Thanks for the story... After my initial read last night, it seems clear that the events in this book are coincident with Val Con's visit back to Vandar to clean up the DOI teams on the ground there (I forget the name of the story). Is that right? Also, are the Bedel the descendants of the group that Liad dea'Syl brought onto the bridge of the Quick Passage and asked transport from Cantra yos'Phelium? I wonder if the luthia has a dream of that time...

Thanks again, I enjoyed it very much...
Stan

Re: Time Frame and Characters

Date: 2012-10-24 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ariaflame.livejournal.com
Possibly, though I think those were mostly the precursors to the dramliz. What ship is being alluded to in the story I don't know. I found myself wondering if they had anything to do with the creation of Bechimo. They seem to be fairly good on the tech side after all.

Date: 2012-10-25 06:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
Quick question -- I notice that the eArc (ePub) seems to jump from Chapter 29 to Chapter 31. Should there be a Chapter 30?

Date: 2012-10-25 11:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
Cancel that. A little closer review of the table of contents shows that there are two chapter 29s, with different content, followed by chapter 31. So likely the second chapter 29 actually is chapter 30.

Of course, if you would like to slip another chapter in there, I wouldn't argue :-)

Date: 2012-10-25 12:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rolanni.livejournal.com
Welp, that's better than I did, by a long shot. The submission copy has two chapter 21s and two chapter 24s.

Sigh. The last thing I usually do before I convert-and-save the submission copy is search on "chapter" and go through the whole manuscript to make sure the numbering is in order and that I didn't skip any numbers.

...though to be fair, all the numbers are in order, and I didn't skip one.

So when's the next book? :D

Date: 2012-10-25 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rasmusb.livejournal.com
I read it yesterday. :) I liked it very much -- although it took me a second to lock it in the correct book time line order. Miri was still pregnant in Necessity? So this is before the last Theo book but after the second? (Sorry names slip my mind so instead of getting it wrong...numbers are your friends.)

I do like the Bedel -- very interesting group -- and until the ... ahem ... planting of the seed I had a suspicion they were more like Uncle's group. ;)

I also suspected the ship they may be looking for may be Bechimo -- but on second thought -- these really don't seem the type of group who Uncle would trust enough to link up with.

So glad to see how our main characters are adapting, kinda fun to see Nova having to deal with constant informality. (Loved that bit about "Hi Mike" -- loudly announced just in case anyone had been knocked unconscious & unaware they had arrived).

I also appreciated how you showed what affect Plan B (and Aunt Kareen) had on Syl Vor. He really gets under your skin - poor little mite. I cannot wait to see more from him & his Sister. :)

Re: So when's the next book? :D

Date: 2012-10-25 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rolanni.livejournal.com
...although it took me a second to lock it in the correct book time line order. Miri was still pregnant in Necessity? So this is before the last Theo book but after the second? (Sorry names slip my mind so instead of getting it wrong...numbers are your friends.)

Necessity's Child actually takes place concurrently with some of the action in Ghost Ship (the third "Theo" book). We've been telling people it takes place "in a pocket" of Ghost Ship.

Re: So when's the next book? :D

Date: 2012-10-25 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wm annis (from livejournal.com)
In the *secret* pocket of Ghost Ship, of course. Along with the cutlery. ;)

Re: So when's the next book? :D

Date: 2012-10-26 06:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muirecan.livejournal.com
I believe the ship they where asked to look for was Rhys' ship. The one the pilot sold him off of to the DOI. And does anyone else want to slap the DOI for that hideous thing they have done damaging their personnel that way?

Re: So when's the next book? :D

Date: 2012-10-26 11:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mbarker.livejournal.com
I think there are two ships missing. One is Rhys' ship, which Val Con helps with in the epilogue. However, I think the Bedel as a whole also apparently are expecting a ship.

I got the impression that they had stopped on Surebleak for a while, but not with the intent to be permanent residents. So they probably sent their ship off, expecting it to come back after a while. However...

Maybe a future tale of the Bedel (and Korval?) will help explain where their ship has been? At least, I can hope... got all those fives to fill up, right?

Re: So when's the next book? :D

Date: 2012-10-26 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rolanni.livejournal.com
There are two ships in play. I haven't seen the galleys yet, though they're promised RSN, but there ought to be some discussion among the luthia and the headman about how they're going to handle the future, since the pickup time is long past. Kezzi also asks Syl Vor, roundabout, when they're playing with the silhouettes.

That's a different ship from Momma Liberty.

Can anyone tell me about the mesh hand?

Date: 2012-10-25 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stephanie leif (from livejournal.com)
I vaguely remember reading something about similar in perhaps one of the chapter books.

I enjoyed the book very much. Thanks

Date: 2012-10-25 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lornastutz.livejournal.com
I thought the missing ship was the one Rhys was working on until he was "sold" to the DOI - the DOI told him it was destroyed

Date: 2012-10-26 06:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muirecan.livejournal.com
That was a nice story. I really enjoyed the overly serious young Master Silver who needed to learn to be a child again. And Rhys who needed his soul healed. I like how it works out very much. I suspect Anthora's touch there in blurring exact recall of events at the end of the book. I don't want to leave Kezzi out because I really liked her and her opening up the world of the Bedel's to us.

I also enjoyed seeing Boss Nova at work and at play.

Date: 2012-10-26 12:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rolanni.livejournal.com
Thank you; I really, really like this one. It turned out just as it ought to have.

Date: 2012-10-27 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muirecan.livejournal.com
I've always enjoyed the stories that are small vignette's within a world but open up so much more of the world for exploration. It is apparently a small quiet story that only really directly affects a handful of people. And yet the ripples that spin out from this quiet small story of Syl Vor, Kezzi, and Rhys will have impacts on their universe.

Rhys i now the second Agent to break conditioning. It's been done twice this means it can be done and Korval has access to both. The Bedel/Korval interactions will be fascinating and I think is something that has happened before. You see hints in the allies we encounter in other of the Liad books. And here we see the start of how such allies whirl into Korval's orbit. And its a story of healing and growth and childhood.

Oh well I think you get that I like it. :D

Date: 2012-10-27 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] libertariansold.livejournal.com
:(
I put this here instead of the thread above since I suppose there is (mildly) a spoiler.
Yet another YA novel that does little to nothing to resolve the DoI arc. That makes four in a row. Plus Trade Secrets makes five. Plus three (is that right?) Carousel something books makes eight novels between Plan B and any chance of resolving the arc.
Well, I have four years until I reach the authoress' current age. Possibly by then I will know how it comes out.

My Mistake

Date: 2012-10-27 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] libertariansold.livejournal.com
I meant I Dare, not Plan B

Date: 2012-10-27 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rolanni.livejournal.com
Well, yanno.... If you're only in it to find out what happens to the DOI. . .

I'd say you're reading for the wrong reason. That is, of course, Just Me.

To address your specific complaint, I did SAY early and often that Necessity's Child was a standalone, so I really don't feel terrible that you dropped $15 on a book you had to know, going in, would disappoint you.

I'm trying to work out which the other four -- or five, or whatever -- "YA" novels are.

I can assure you there are only two more "Carousel Something" books -- three in total -- so you can rest easy, there.

Well, I am Reading Because

Date: 2012-10-27 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] libertariansold.livejournal.com
Of Anthora, Nova, Nateesa, Pat Rin, Shan and Prescilla.
And Er Thom, Anne, and Aeilliana, who are mostly dead--I know, happens to everybody.
And Clutch Turtles ;
And cats.
And since you created those fabulous characters, it is clearly all YOUR fault that I am hanging here wanting more of them.
Post Delm Val Con and Miri I can definitely do without more of; Daav I have never made up my mind about.
A common denominator of them is they are all adults (well, maybe not Sheather). I am afraid I lost interest in reading about protagonists growing up, and their angst, and immaturity long ago. A pastiche such as He Won The Day is about my limit.
I certainly do not regret spending the money. Not only did you indeed say it was a one-off (thank God) but, writers gotta eat. And artistry (not to mention hard work) should be rewarded and sustained.
My regret is the time it is taking, not the money. I have promised myself I will never willingly submit to a WoT experience again.
And here I am.
Of course, based on comments, this is just me.
The YA books are this one, the Theo ones, and the Trade ones--so I suppose that is seven.
Thanks for responding. Hope the storm does not hit too badly. Here in West Africa those are really not a problem.

Date: 2012-10-27 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muirecan.livejournal.com
Oh but this book does add to the DOI arc. We see the second agent ever break conditioning. Given that we see early in the book that safely breaking conditioning is not easy so the second successful breaking of conditioning is important.

Date: 2012-10-27 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alon ziv (from livejournal.com)
Does anyone have an idea how old Syl Vor is in this novel? (I've pegged him at "between 8 and 10", but I'm not all that certain…

An interesting point here is that the DOI appears to really have a beef with Korval specifically – whatever their Plan is, it is more than just subverting Liad. It's also clear that they have capabilities beyond anyone else (such as the programming of Agents). Makes me ever more curious about who they are and what their goal is…

Very enjoyable read! Rys is a gem; so is the Bedel culture. I sure hope to see more of these new characters in further books :)

Syl Vor's age?

Date: 2012-10-27 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gus fleischmann (from livejournal.com)
Do we know how old Syl Vor is ? I'm guessing 10-12, but sometimes he seems even younger.

Re: Syl Vor's age?

Date: 2012-10-27 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rolanni.livejournal.com
FWIW, somebody asked this over on FB and my (of course very helpful) answer was...

I really avoid definitively saying how old children who live in books are. This is partly because some people will have their enjoyment of the story Utterly Spoiled because they "know" definitively what a 6, 9, 12, 16 year old "acts like." I'm sorry for that, but I'm sorrier because some of them will feel compelled to tell me I don't know what I'm talking about :)

Also, because we have not only different planets, with different rotations and year lengths (and while the Standard Year is "standard," it's not a Terran year), but cultures with very different expectations with regard to age, the question, "how old?" tends to get meaningless pretty quick.

Re: Syl Vor's age?

Date: 2012-10-27 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gus fleischmann (from livejournal.com)
Sigh, thanks for the reply anyway.

I was more trying to fit Syl Vor into the range of ages we've seen of children of the clan in the past. For example in Intelligent Design we know that Neither Shan or Val Can are 20 (old enough to buy a knife on port) but they seem significantly more mature than Syl Vor.

I shall continue to muddle through some how.

I am very much enjoying the addition of a new member of the clan as a primary view point - reminds me very much of Pat Rin bursting onto the scene in I dare.

Date: 2012-10-27 11:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drammar.livejournal.com
Compelling story. I like seeing and hearing about "things" from a child's perspective because they often see and hear things that adults, in all their busyness, often miss. Lots of insight into life on Surebleak for the Clan, as well as more information about the insidiousness of the DOI. And to me, this was not "a story about a child." It was a story told from a child's perspective -- very different thing, I think.

I'm glad that from your viewpoint it "turned out just as it ought." I imagine that with the bullheadedness of Korval that stories about them often go in directions that you weren't planning on at the beginning. I like the resolution as well, and am glad that it pleased you.

Thanks -- this is one that will be re-read frequently.

That was unexpected

Date: 2012-10-28 02:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wm annis (from livejournal.com)
While I have reread a number of the Liaden books (probably all of them except the Crystal books, now that I think on it), I have never finished, waited a day, and gone immediately back. I did for this one.

In any case, random thoughts —

First, Anthora scares the ever-living crap out of me. Why more people aren't alarmed by her baffles me. I laughed out loud at, "Aunt Anthora was slightly less tall, but there was, Syl Vor thought, no sense bringing Aunt Anthora into things just yet."

Second, I loved seeing more of Nova at work (I notice I'm not alone in this).

Third, the Liaden perspective on "Simon says" may be the most succinct account of melant'i I have yet seen.

Re: That was unexpected

Date: 2012-10-28 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rolanni.livejournal.com
Heh. Heh. Heh.

And, yeah, Anthora scares me, too.

Finished.

Date: 2012-10-29 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gus fleischmann (from livejournal.com)
Loved the book. Initially I had some reservations about the Bedel, but as I have learned in the past I should just trust the authors as they have yet to disappoint ME.

I am in awe of your continuing ability to make an already large and complex universe larger and more complex and yet by the end it all hangs together nicely.

I also don't find this book, or the Theo arc to be YA, but that of course is for each to decide how they feel.

Also I no longer expect your books to end in a way that ties things up in a completed bow, they are more windows in to a long and continuing multi generation story. This is fine as long as you both agree to live forever and never stop writing.

Thanks again for another terrific read.

Finished. Congrats on nuance.

Date: 2012-11-03 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mindsurfer1.livejournal.com
Thank you for an excellent and enjoyable read.
On the question of age - we know that Sil Vor is not yet hafling, a bit old for the nursery, old enough to train in self defense, and old enough to carry a weapon.
What "I" particularly liked is the author's deft touch with voice. Sil Vor is the child who because of "Plan B" must too soon come the adult.
Through Necessity he has done and does a credible job in the extreme - the future Delm perhaps. But Sil Vor is still a child, therefore, his "voice" in the narrative is at times uncertain in its maturity.
I was pleased to see Anthora helping smooth things out. Let him enjoy what is left of his childhood.
Sil Vor has the mettle to become a very great Dragon indeed!

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