If This Goes On

Wednesday, December 2nd, 2009 10:47 am
rolanni: (Herself)
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Boring writing post follows.

This rumination is brought to you in equal parts by those who think that all ideas presented in a science fiction novel are "believed" by the author, and by considerations for the presentation I'm to give in February.

You have been Warned.
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Science Fiction, for those of you who are tuning in late, is the literature that asks What If? What If we could harness some passing migratory birds and hitch a ride to the moon? What If there were giant, sentient, space-going turtles? What If I could download my personality into a starship?

As you can see, a lot of science fiction has its world-building and its storytelling firmly rooted in What If?

But What If? has a cousin -- the Second Principle, if you will: If This Goes On. . .

If This Goes On. . . is an extrapolation. The writer takes something -- a trend, an idea, a law, and explores it, takes it out to its limit -- or to a limit. If This Goes On. . . is a playground where we can test out these notions and possible outcomes, without. . .physical. . .danger. There is, I'll warn, some potential for discomfort, but nothing fatal should happen. It's just a game, right? A Thought Experiment.

In Fledgling, Delgado is designated as a Safe World -- a concept that has its roots very much in If This Goes On. . .. Let me see if I can retrace the thoughts that led us there. . .

Back in February 2003, the crew of the space shuttle Columbia died when their spaceship came apart around them on re-entry. It was a terrible thing. Seven bright, brave people -- gone from us, and horribly, foreknowing their deaths.

A lot of people were upset by this disaster -- I was, certainly -- and there was a great public sharing of grief. I expected the grief and the public lamentations.

What I didn't expect was the call of some people to end the space program, because the loss of life was unacceptably high.

Granted, the tragedy. Granted, the loss of seven brilliant lights, which diminishes us all. Seven heroes, the like of which we will never see again. Heroes, like Scouts, lead the way. They draw danger to themselves, and make the path safer for those who follow. They know that they might not survive.

Well. . .fair enough. We're not all heroes. Most of us, we just want to live our lives, love and be loved, write our books, do our work, raise our kids. We want to be comfortable. To be safe.

In search of comfort and safety, we form into communities: colleges, say; or SF fandom. Places where we can go about our work, our lives and the raising of our children without being concerned that some random danger will intrude upon us. When something goes wrong inside our safe places -- someone steals a bike, or breaks a window, or grabs somebody off the sidewalk -- that's a violation not only of our own safety and comfort, but of the integrity of the whole community.

We work hard to keep the boundaries of our neighborhoods safe; and those who venture outside -- the heroes, the rash or the mad -- they take their own chances, as adults, wisely or not. There is no safety fencing around Mount Everest; people still fight fires. Adults determine their own level of acceptable Danger. Or -- another way -- Acceptable Safety.

This seems reasonable, right?

Adults also decide for children. And children must, naturally and always, be safe.

"Oh," a friend will say, "I really want to go to that exhibition, but really, my kids shouldn't be exposed to such images -- they're too young."

Hire a sitter, you suggest.

"Oh, goodness, no. There are so many crazy people out there; so many things happen. My children wouldn't be safe!"

If this goes on. . .

And so, back to science fiction, and the planet Delgado. A Safe World, by intent, and desire. Its citizens value safety, and accept certain constraints and regulations, as the price of being perfectly safe. Let's look at that -- it's OK; we're going to do it in a novel; it's a game. You might feel, a little, uncomfortable. You might think the whole thing's swell.

You. Might. Think.

. . .and that, oh dearly beloved, is a Good Thing.

writing- what if... etc.

Date: 2009-12-02 04:02 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Bravo!!!

And I bet the trains run on time there too :)

Nanette

Date: 2009-12-02 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brock-tn.livejournal.com
No trains: they might crash.

Date: 2009-12-02 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jelazakazone.livejournal.com
Thanks for sharing your thought processes. I have just started reading the hard copy of Fledgling and I was thinking about Safeties and what a Safe World meant, especially when The Eyes really can't see everywhere.

What if??

Date: 2009-12-02 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scrapcat.livejournal.com
Ah, yes - keep everyone safe. Kids don't play with other kids on the block, neighbors don't watch out for other people's kids because they might be accused of something nasty, and the media scares the devil out of us nightly warning us about everything from the local pizza shop to flawed jump ropes. We must wear seatbelts, helmets, and sunblock. And if we do something that defies common sense, there is always a big company we can sue for negligence. Personal responsibility is non-existent - just ask the parent of any 8th grader who just failed a test. Do you think you've hit one of my nerves????? Thanks for letting me rant.

Re: What if??

Date: 2009-12-02 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keristor.livejournal.com
Oh. I just looked at your profile. I thought you were writing about the UK...

One of mine too...

Date: 2009-12-02 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicoli-dominn.livejournal.com
Not boring at all. In fact, it seems to be that same train of thought Philip K. Dick used to ride. Although...his books were often kind of a combination of "what if" and "if the [what if] continues." The scary thing is that he seemed to have predicted a lot of future technological advances/human behaviors that way.

Where are you making your presentation? I'd be interested to stay tuned through a webcast or something.

Date: 2009-12-02 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rolanni.livejournal.com
Although...his books were often kind of a combination of "what if" and "if the [what if] continues."

Oh, sure. Nothing says that you can't mix things up, and most of us do. A little What If, A little If This Goes On -- it's all good for the stew.

Where are you making your presentation? I'd be interested to stay tuned through a webcast or something.

Colby College, February...18, a Thursday. I'm one of four panelists speaking about our avocations; the only non-academic. I don't think that there will be webcasting, but I'll post my part of the proceedings here, since I'm having to actually write a speech (http://rolanni.livejournal.com/496192.html).

Date: 2009-12-02 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brock-tn.livejournal.com
I rather thought that you did a good job of conveying the whole concept of a "Safe World" within the context of the story, without ever having to come right out and explicitly describe the phenomenon.

Safe! Are you blind Ump!

Date: 2009-12-02 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bookmobiler.livejournal.com
The problem with safety is that it can never be a reality.

Humanity has had millions of years of practice in screwing it up.

That is probably OK.

Progress of any kind has never been safe.

Date: 2009-12-02 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keristor.livejournal.com
"Those who would give up essential liberty to purchase a little temporary safety deserve neither..."

It's OK, just to think, but it's not OK to do...

Date: 2009-12-02 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] robotech-master.livejournal.com
In regard to the "people who thinks the author believes everything he writes": some people may find this hard to believe, but it happens.

Just ask Mercedes Lackey why she stopped writing Diana Tregarde novels.

http://www.mercedeslackey.com/features_laststraw.html

Date: 2009-12-03 04:43 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Just...wow

Date: 2009-12-14 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alfreda89.livejournal.com
Misty and Larry's experiences makes being asked if I was Mormon after writing the Nuala novels very small potatoes....

Delgado - a planet of cows

Date: 2009-12-02 08:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] muehe.livejournal.com
the scouts have it right -- maybe a nice place to visit. But you would have to be crazy to live there.
exception, if you are there on a mission.

Date: 2009-12-02 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I really enjoyed reading about your thought processes; I had wondered whilst reading Fledgling what prompted the creation of Delgado. I thought it might have been a reaction against the nanny state in which many of us live, where we are virtually immobilised by over-the-top rules and regulations designed to keep us from harm (and from ever growing up).

Date: 2009-12-02 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drammar.livejournal.com
You. Might. Think.

This is what attracted me to your books from the start. I found that my worldview was challenged, and that I started to say "What if...?" and "Why not...?"

If This Goes On is an extraordinarily valuable way of thinking, not only for writers, but for those of us who are readers, too. I remember Heinlein's book of the same name that was a scathing critique of how a free country could become an oppressed, entrenched theocracy in a few short steps. Truly frightening, but it could happen...

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Edited Date: 2009-12-02 09:56 pm (UTC)

Excellent post

Date: 2009-12-03 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I truly enjoyed this.
Lauretta@ConstellationBooks

Date: 2009-12-05 11:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kk1raven.livejournal.com
Where's the boring writing post you warned about? I certainly didn't find this one boring.

Date: 2009-12-14 09:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alfreda89.livejournal.com
Which was half of what made the book so interesting.... ;^)

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