Housekeeping
Thursday, January 29th, 2015 11:08 amHave updated the Correct Reading Order page to include Dragon in Exile, which will be published in June.
Have updated the Correct Reading Order page to include Dragon in Exile, which will be published in June.
I have been remiss in letting y'all know of a wonderful present created for you -- yes, you! -- by David Mattingly, in concert with Toni Weisskopf, Madame the Publisher, of Baen Books.
David, of course, has painted six brilliant Liaden Universe® covers: Saltation, Mouse and Dragon, Ghost Ship, Dragon Ship, Necessity's Child, and Dragon in Exile. We admire his work greatly, but with this time, he's outdone himself.
Without further ado, then, we offer you the animated version of the cover for Dragon in Exile, an effort that has variously been described as wonderful, terrifying, cheesy, fabulous, frisking weird, annoying, awesome, great, and stunning.
What do you think? Take a look and let me know.
Today's Baen Free Radio Hour features an interview with Sharon Lee (hey, that's me!) talking with Baen editor and podmaster Tony Daniel about Carousel Seas, and! Chapter 39 of Larry Correia's Hard Magic, as read by Bronson Pinchot. Here's your link.
We here in Central Maine are currently trembling under the weight of a Winter Storm Watch. The weatherbeans are calling 5-8 inches of snowfall Saturday night, with a delicate inch or two of ice added on Sunday. We are Charging All The Things and hoping that the power stays on.
In celebration of the Storm Watch, I went into town today to perform Necessary Errands, and to leave the cover art for Dragon in Exile in the capable hands of Amy Cyrway at the Framemakers. If it's possible for anyone to be more excited about this art than Steve and me, then that person would be Amy.
Speaking of the Dragon in Exile cover art, Long-time and Always Intrepid Friend of Liad Mike Barker has worked out the kanji on the sign below the red dragon. He tells me it reads "dragon dwelling in exile," which is so cool, I may still swoon. But not before I ask if there is anyone in the studio audience, or perhaps someone playing along at home who reads Arabic. Because I'd really like to know if the letters over the red door to Miri's right can be deciphered.
In other news, the Big Pile of Sebastian St. Cyr mysteries that I ordered before Christmas have arrived. Seven books, no waiting. That'll keep me busy for a while. Especially since I'm, yanno, supposed to be writing a book.
We're looking at getting back to this whole writing thing on Monday. Five weeks of being ill kind of took a sledgehammer to the writing schedule, the house schedule, the sleep schedule, and all the other schedules, with the possible exception of the cat-feeding schedule, though I vaguely recall Scrabble putting me on notice that she was considering filing a Formal Complaint.
It'll be exciting, getting everything all lined up again. Honestly, you wouldn't think, to look at us, that there were any schedules. Just goes to show. . .something.
Everybody have a great weekend.
So, we taught Steve's doctor a new phrase today, "con crud."
That was after we rose early, after a very restless night, and I said to Steve, "You look worse than you did last night when we went to bed. Should you call the doctor?" and Steve said to me, "I think I'm going to call the doctor."
Phone call made, we were given a gratifyingly quick appointment with the Actual Doctor, who ordered a blood test which he admitted probably wasn't needed, but he's a conservative fellow, and prescribed cough medicine and rest.
So, that's the order of the day for at least half of the Lee-Miller Household. I'm feeling much better than yesterday, myself (no headache. MAN, I hate headaches.), but, with Steve's example before me, will try to weave some rest into the remainder of the day.
In other news, the FINAL final cover for Dragon in Exile was waiting in my inbox this morning, with a nice note from David Mattingly. This is a full wrap cover, which means the scene starts on the front of the book and finishes up on the back. I think it's gorgeous, and am pleased to see a nod to the very first cover to grace Agent of Change (art by Stephen Hickman).
For those who collect art, David is making a limited number of prints of this cover available. If you're interested, write to him at davidATdavidmattinglyDOTcom
Here's the art:
It snowed this morning; now, it's spitting ice pellets. In view of the weather, I declined to go into town, hoping for better tomorrow.
For fun, I called the oil company to find out why we'd run out of oil. I also solicited promises that this would never happen again, promises the young lady at the Office adroitly failed to give while being oh-so-helpful. One result of her helpfulness and my continuing failure to understand how this unhappy circumstance could have come about, is that we will host yet! another! tech! tomorrow. He will check the lines and the intake, the tank, and the furnace itself, to be sure that we don't have a slow leak somewhere, and to patch it if we do.
So, that.
I again called the Maine State Archivist, who was not in, though this time, I got to leave a message with a live person, rather than voice mail. I received a promise that the Archivist would return my call this afternoon, but I have Doubts that this will actually happen. Perhaps he'll prove me wrong.
I also called the guy who gave us a quote on putting a rooflet over the outside front stairs, and then disappeared off the face of the earth, to find out if he actually intended to do the work, and when. That call went to voice-mail, which I supposed I could've predicted.
In between phone calls, and before we had finished off the coffee in the pot, a UPS truck pulled into the driveway, and the driver gave into Steve's hands two boxes of post cards -- one for Trade Secrets and one for Carousel Seas -- which we will be taking with us to PhilCon. Many thanks to Laura at Baen, for putting this together for us.
The mail brought the yearly aggravation of Form 8802, wherein we pay the government a fee to certify that that we are, indeed, US citizens, and therefore do not have to pay taxes on monies we earn overseas. So, yanno, yay.
I should probably finish off my phone calling extravaganza with a call to the ACA, to see if I can get a supervisor, or somebody who has once in their life at least looked over the edge of the box, but I fear the force is not sufficiently strong in me.
Alliance of Equals stands at just a smidge shy of 31,000 words. I have about 7,700 words (roughly two chapters) left from the words excised from Dragon in Exile, and I believe they go Right About Here, which will put me, again, roughly, at just about 40,000 words. Which will be a good place to leave it while we go down-coast to party. When we come home from PhilCon, I'll read those 40,000-ish words, and then move on with the next 60-90,000-ish all-new words. This book is due on Madame the Editor's desk in February. No, I don't know when it will be published, or when the eArc will be available, just to nip those both in the bud.
Several people have wanted to know how come Alliance is moving along "so quickly" while Dragon took so long to write. There are two answers to that -- three answers, if you count the age-old, and very true, "all books write different" -- a simple answer and a complicated one.
The simple answer is: Dragon is Exile took so long to write because I was trying writing two books at once.
The complicated answer also addresses the question raised by the simple answer ("But WHY were you trying to write two books at once?" so hang on to that one, 'k? Thx.)
The reason we were trying to write two books at once is:
1. We pitched five books, and the first book in the pitch had to do with the Dutiful Passage
2. One of the other books had to do with Surebleak
3. The Surebleak book wanted to be written first, but I (mostly, it was I) resisted this, insisting that the first book had to be written first.
(A side issue which still influenced the writing -- I was at the bottom of the Manic/Depressive Wheel. Between us, I was in a hole under the wheel, which is just generally a very bad place to write from. It's especially a bad place to start writing from, because the beginning of the book is where you set up all the stuff that's going to, yanno, happen in the story. And the beginning of a series -- or of a five-book dash -- is where you set up the rest of the series. That means it's really preferable to have good access to your brain. And the big thing that depression does, besides making you feel bad, is? Right. Depression makes you stupid. So, that.)
4. By the time I realized that I had to write the Surebleak book first, or kill both it and the Passage book through Auctorial Stupidity, and untangled the plots from each other, the Surebleak book no longer trusted me.
5. That meant that I needed to coax it, and sweet-talk it, and Calmly Accept whatever bits and pieces it gave me. Then, after I had all the bits and pieces I was apparently going to get, I had to figure out the order of the scenes, and write all the connective tissue. And! Since the book no longer trusted me, I had to trust it. Which among other things meant accepting the existence of a character whose purpose in the story was only Revealed as we were going through the penultimate draft.
5a. Steve could not take over and Just Write the Book because, (1) I was being an idiot, and (2) the entangled plots were a mess the like of which you rarely see. I hardly knew how to untangle them, and it was my mess.
5b. Tangential Interesting Factoid: At one point early in our career, we did manage to write A Whole Wrong Book. The solution to that was easy -- write the correct book. In the five weeks, I think it was, to deadline.
6. The good side of all this is that, when we came to address Book the Second, we had almost a quarter of a book already in the can. Which is why Alliance seems to be moving along at such a spanking pace.
Today's blog title comes to you, again, courtesy of Steeleye Span: Lady Isobel and the Elf Knight
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Progress on Alliance of Equals
30,874/100,000 OR 31% Complete
"He's a bit stiff in the honor, the third mate," he murmured.
. . .and that's that.
Yesterday, after having ourselves Spoken early at the polls, we decided to make a day of it, since a day doing Something was better than a day spent obsessively checking the news. We therefore had breakfast at Governor's before hitting the interstate and heading south, the mp3 player jacked into Kineo's sound system so we didn't have to listen to any more political ads.
I have learned that Kineo the Wonder Subaru will pop a discreet warning light when I have 75 miles left on my current tank of gas, which is good to know. The range for the tank is about 500 miles. Which is not only good to know, but downright amazing.
Once we were actually in the South, we did some scoping out of the Sanford-Springvale-Rochester NH megaplex, had a nice, light lunch at Green Tea and come home by way of Wells and Kennebunkport. I tried to get a photo of the seals on the rocky island off of Wells Beach, but -- no luck.
For congoing folk: Remember that Lee and Miller will be Principal Speakers at PhilCon. We will not only be giving a speech -- which is a thing I do but rarely, so you know you want to hear this one -- but we will -- rather, our traveling companions will be hosting a Teddy Bear Tea* on Saturday, November 22 at 11 a.m. Coffee, tea, cookies will be served, so bring your favorite stuffed animal to share an hour of refinement, relaxation and camaraderie.
Even if you don't like tea, or plushies, do plan on coming to PhilCon. Artist GOH this year is Bob Eggleton; Special Guest is Kyle Cassidy. In addition, dozens of other writers, and artists will be present. There will be readings! panels! a dealers room full of all kinds of Amazing Stuff! and an art show to die for.
Really, you can't miss this.
In Dragon in Exile news, there had been two requests.
One for a blurb/synopsis of the book. Here's that link (thanks to Chris Meadows for finding it).
Two for information about the availability of limited edition prints of the Dragon in Exile cover. I wrote to Mr. Mattingly and he says that there will be prints available when he's through with the final painting (Dragon in Exile will have a wrap-around cover, and he needs to finish up what will become the back panel). When complete, the prints will be 13x19, formatted horizontally. He estimates that he'll be done with the final in two weeks. If you'd like a print, you can write directly to David Mattingly at: davidATdavidmattinglyDOTcom.
. . .and I think that's all the news that's fit to print.
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*Not limited to Teddy Bears, all plushy friends are welcome. Among the attendees of the Teddy Bear Tea at PenguiCon was a pink plush triangle wearing sunglasses.
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Progress on Alliance of Equals
16,310/100,000 OR 16.31% Complete
Now, on Liad, they would say: There are fifty High Houses.
Now, on Liad, they would say: A Dragon does not change its nature.
This just in from Madame the Editor.
This is the eighteenth novel detailing the adventures of Clan Korval and other residents of the Liaden Universe®.
The hardcover will be in bookstores in June 2015. For those who treasure a passion for eArcs, count backward four months from June for your probable release date. No word yet on whether there will be an audiobook edition.
More news as it becomes available.
This was the scene of debauchery we discovered in our living room, yesterday afternoon:
This morning, we slept in somewhat, in celebration of the fact that tomorrow heralds the return of The Schedule. Steve made us asparagus omelets with hollandaise sauce for breakfast, after which I retired to the couch to elevate my foot and finish the book I was reading. Those tasks now accomplished, I will turn my attention toward speech-writing, and laundry-finishing, as Steve has dealt with the dishes.
For those playing along at home -- we've gotten feedback from a fan on Dragon on Exile, which I reproduce here: "Wow."
So, that's coming in June 2015.
. . .and I think that's all the news that's fit to print.
So, yesterday was various errands, including the Getting of the Flu Shots, and tomorrow there are more errands. Today, I believe there is cleaning, including post-writing disaster control of my office. Which, to be fair, is Slightly Less Awful than it Often Is in terms of Sheer Volume. On the other paw, I can't just sweep stacks of paper into trash bags, either, because there are Large Swaths of at least one other book interleaved with the pages that finally came to make up Dragon in Exile.
Speaking of Dragon in Exile, or at least, speaking of Val Con and Miri, who are more-or-less major actors in the novel, something went past my eyeballs a while ago, regarding characterization in the Liaden Universe®. The assertion of the writer was that while the authors get positive points for writing strong female characters, those points are crushed under the number of negative points the authors get for pairing said strong, intelligent females with a male characters who are even stronger and smarter.
It probably goes without saying -- but I'll say it anyway -- that I don't see it that way. Speaking specifically of Miri and Val Con, what I see is two smart, capable people who have had vastly different lives, and who therefore have different strengths, and weaknesses, who happen to complement each other.
As a question of craft, I've always felt that it's a cheat to demonstrate that one's female character is strong and intelligent by deliberately pairing her with a weak or venal, less-intelligent male. Just as it's a cheat to demonstrate that your hero is strong, smart, and morally upstanding by pairing him with Pretty Maggie Moneyeyes.
Also, just personally, I wonder why a strong, smart character of any gender you like would partner with a dummy (OK; maybe in terms of muscle or money). But, generally, in terms of survival, wouldn't you want the smartest, strongest, most sympatico person you could get for your partner?
So, anyhow, that's what I think. What do you think?
I finished the Ultimating of Dragon in Exile in the wee hours of the morning. For those playing along at home, the word count stands at 127,690 -- or! 128% complete.
Today, I'll print out and Steve will read the book from "The. . ." all the way to "own." We are, just a smidge, ahead of schedule.
This timing is actually going to work well, because among yesterday's treasures was a call from our real estate agent, telling us that we need to vacate the house this afternoon so that it can be shown. So! This morning -- straighten the house and print out the manuscript. This evening -- um? Scrabble? Rummy? My Neighbor Tortoro? Tomorrow -- we're scheduled to look at two houses in town in the afternoon, around which errands Steve will read the manuscript and I will read. . .something else. After he finishes his read, I will fix any problems he has identified, or -- if it is a Perfect Manuscript, which is, of course, Exactly What We Expect(tm) -- I'll simply make sure things are spelled correctly, convert the manuscript to .doc and email it to Madame the Editor.
Whereupon there will be MUCH rejoicing.
Remember that the Birthday Planning Challenge to win a free! audio! edition! of Carousel Sun by Sharon Lee (hey, that's me!) is still going on. Rules and entry forms HERE. Thanks to everyone who has entered so far; you guys think I'm some kind of adventurous.
And now? I need to refill my coffee cup and turn on the Cat Eating Machine.
As I drink my first cup of coffee on this lowering and damp Saturday morning, 66% of Dragon in Exile's Penultimate Manuscript is Ultimate. This is down from yesterday evening's report to Facebook of 68%, because Steve needed to tweak the Last Missing Scene, and tweaking added words. The Penultimate Manuscript, then -- and always realizing that this is a Fluid Thing -- stands at 125,000 words. It is equally possible, in the upcoming process, that we will lose or gain words. Occasionally, the word count at the end of the last edit remains exactly the same, but the specific words have all been altered.
In any case, I have 34% or about 36,000 words/190 pages of Penultimate Draft to transform into Ultimate Draft. The 83,000 words that lie behind me had been pretty well gone over, and over, and over, so progress was swift. The ones that lie ahead -- not so much with the polishing. Expect progress to slow.
The final draft is due to Madame the Editor on Monday, September 15, and we're still well on track to meet that deadline.
For those playing along at home, I have heard from the Top Secret Office at Nook Press, which assures me that they are looking into the non-payment problem. So, that.
And I think that's all I've got. Writers are boring when they're on deadline. . .
So! What're you doing this weekend that's fun?
So, having cleverly extended #1 on the Tuesday To-Do List to "Sleep Unreasonably Late on Wednesday" -- a strategy I recommend highly to those others who've had "Sleep Forever" on their to-do lists for a while -- I had a leisurely breakfast with my lovely and talented husband and attending cats, answered a couple of emails and will soon retire to the Front Office to start the process of making the Penultimate Draft into the Ultimate Draft. This will be interspersed with laundry-doing because. . .necessity.
I do like working at home.
Thanks to those who have looked/are looking for descriptions of Val Con and Miri!
In other news, still house-hunting, and simultaneously looking at ways to perhaps make this house continue to work for us. Building an attached two-car garage might be one step, given that we could refinance at a lower rate. It seems like a huge project, but what do I know? Might also upgrade the kitchen cabinets while we're at it, and screen in the existing porch, which strikes me as the most minor of all these possible steps. So. . .thinking about how to even approach that process, and keeping sight of the fact that, while none of those steps brings this house closer to town, if they make keeping it less intense, they might tip the balance.
In between all of that, I'm eagerly anticipating the arrival of Things in the Mail, including (in no specific order) two decks of Tarot of the Zirkus Magi, Girl Genius Volume 13, a couple of Loth Hoodies (because you can never have too many elven hoodies), and an album of hand-colored photographs and post cards from 1872-1912 featuring geisha (because. . .photographs! geisha!)
And I think that's all the news that's fit to print.
Onward, to the couch!
One of my friends reminded me that Labor Day is a day when we don't work.
But, yanno?
Historically, Labor Day has been a day when I do work, if by "working" we mean "writing," because the day-job was closed, which meant I had all day to write.
So, I'm a little sorry that I slept the whole Labor Day aspect of the weekend, because it's good to celebrate our own history, and the times that made us who we are.
In writing news, no the penultimate draft is not yet done. Today, perhaps.
And, apropos of nothing much, save something, somewhere flashed across my radar, and I believe we ought to talk about these things, and not hide them in the corner. . .
A couple weeks ago, Robin Williams died after a long battle with a deadly disease, depression.
Think about that for a minute. If that last word had been "cancer" or "diabetes" or "ALS" or Insert Your Favorite Killer Disease Here, people would have been praising his life, calling him a "fighter" and "courageous" and "an inspiration." But the commentary about Williams' death is (mostly) about how he wimped out, how he had "wasted" those years still on his dance card, how he had somehow failed to seek the help that would have saved his life, accompanied by exhortations to those of us who also suffer from the same long-term disease to "get help."
Now, here's the thing. As I understand it, Robin Williams did seek help for his disease. He stopped self-medicating with alcohol and drugs; he entered rehabilitation; he sought therapy -- and by these methods he managed to control his disease, until, in the way of Killer Diseases, one day it was stronger than he was, and he died.
To say that Robin Williams "failed" because he finally, after a long fight, succumbed to his disease is like blaming a cancer patient for dying after the tumors outrun the radiation.
So, that.
Here today at the Cat Farm and Confusion Factory, on September 1, which is simultaneously Scrabble's twelfth birthday, and Labor Day -- it is hot and humid, almost a Baltimore day. We have closed up the windows and turned on the portable air conditioner and the ceiling fans. The cats have melted in various tried and tested melting spots, most of them on top of things -- file cabinets; bookcase; cat tree -- and the writers are at their desks.
It would be a nice day for a picnic at the lake -- and I hope that at least some of y'all are enjoying that gift.
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Progress on Dragon in Exile
116,600/100,000 OR 116.6% complete
"What," he asked, staring at the screens, "is that?"
"Looks like a cruise ship to me," second board said, which he might have known she would do.
"Yes, he said patiently, "but what is it doing in orbit around Surebleak?"
"Maybe they need ice."
Yeah, still writing, here. We did take Friday morning off to explore the renovated base housing in Brunswick (these would be the houses that came empty when the Gummint shut down the Brunswick Naval Air Force Base; they're being renovated in sections by a local company and released for sale). Let us say that renovated base housing is still. . .base housing. However! If you're interested in living in Brunswick, Maine, it is indeed true that the most inexpensive houses in Brunswick are at what is now styled McKeen Landing.
I've been so focused that I forgot that this is Labor Day weekend, which, all things considered, is just as well. Monday is also Scrabble's twelfth birthday, so that's, like, two holidays rolled into one.
Speaking of holiday celebrations, Audible has kindly given me coupon codes good for free copies of the Audible edition of Carousel Sun. As soon as this dragon is out of my hair, I'll be holding a contest to get those codes into good hands.
For those keeping track at home, Dragon in Exile now stands at 113,640 words, more or less. There are three-and-one-half scenes left to be written. To the best of my knowledge. Still hoping to finish the penultimate draft today, so, I'll, ummmm, see you later.
Today's blog post title is brought to you by the B52's "Love Shack." Here's your link.
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Progress on Dragon in Exile
113,640/100,000 OR 113.64% complete
"You are clanless! Avert your face!"
So, yesterday I drove Kineo to Augusta, to, in fact, Charlie's Subaru, in order to have Routine Maintenance done.
This may not sound like much of an adventure. To fully understand how very adventuresome it was as an undertaking, you need to recall -- or be told -- that All of Maine is tearing up the roads. Not only is this the normal and usual Summer Road Construction, but various town are installing gas lines, so additional roads are being torn up for that purpose. In Waterville on any given day, all of the East-West roads may be closed, forcing one to drive through the towns abutting in order to get from one side of the city to the other. This meant, among other things, that I had to choose my route to I95 with care. My information was that the town, or the gas company, had finished with tearing up River Road, so I went that way, and picked up the expressway in Sidney.
For a wonder, the segment of the expressway from Sidney to Augusta was not under construction, so I didn't get into real trouble until I reached Western Avenue, which is being Thoroughly Torn Up, and the turn into Charlie's service area.
This is an important turn on a busy road, and in Rational Times, commands its own turn lane, and its own light. And a sign on the wire that supports the traffic control devices, which says:
LEFT TURN ON GREEN ARROW ONLY
Except, someone, in their infinite wisdom, had wrapped about four hundred yards of black construction plastic all around the Left Turn device, meaning that there was no legal way to get into the service area, except to drive down into Manchester, and turn around.
Ahead of me, the traffic coming from Manchester stretched for miles (it's a long hill; you can actually see for miles), packed like sardines.
I hesitated, wondering WTF?, and in my moment of hesitation an approaching truck stopped and flashed his headlights twice. I seized the day, waved, and made the (illegal) left turn into Charlie's, where I left Kineo in care of the service manager and retired to the waiting room to read in the lovely air conditioning.
One good thing about the waiting room experience -- Charlie is remodeling his showroom, which the waiting room abuts, and the crew had moved the television Somewhere Else, leaving us four old women with our books in peace.
When it came time to leave, I had no fears of the light governing my turn onto Western Avenue; after all I would be turning right, and there was no law nor sign agin' it.
My light was red, as I approached. I stopped the car, looked down to take the lid off of my water bottle, and looked up again to find that my light was green, the car to my right on Western Avenue had stopped in good order, and a jeep breaking from somewhere in the pack, roaring up the shoulder, slammed into the planet-sized pothole next to the stopped car, lofted completely off of the road, slammed back down onto the road halfway through the intersection and tore off down Western Avenue for the space of about eight car lengths, because did I mention that Western Avenue in that area is being Thoroughly Torn Up, with heavy equipment, and huge holes in the road, and all like that?
My light was still green, so I made the turn.
On the expressway on my way back to Waterville, I almost got pushed off the road by a Wide Load veering suddenly into my lane, but that's hardly worth mentioning.
Writing-wise, we're in the home stretch. WARNING: Authors at End-of-Book tend to be cranky. This is due, in part, from having to hold the Whole Freaking Book In Your Head At Once. You should notice no difference in my usual demeanor.
Also? I'm posting a snippet below. If the snippet or any word contained in the snippet offends you? Please keep that information to yourself. Thank you.
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Progress on Dragon in Exile
102,000 out of 100,000 OR 102% complete
She had never seen that lamp before in her life.
Still writing here. Dragon in Exile currently stands at 100,716 words, and will require a few words more to reach the Thrilling Conclusion. I had hoped that we would finish the Penultimate Draft by this coming Sunday, let it sit for two days, and then go through it with the red pen and tidy up, producing thereby the Ultimate Draft in plenty of time for its turn-in date of September 15.
It actually looks like we will meet this schedule. If so, it will be the only thing about this book that has met any schedule or expectation.
Tomorrow morning, Kineo and I are going to the great city of Augusta, there to see Kineo's tires rotated, her oil changed, and various parts lubricated. I hope also to run her through the free car wash before coming home and writing some more.
. . .and that's all I've got.
Hope everyone is enjoying these last few days of summer.
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Progress on Dragon in Exile: GOOD/Author Satisfied
"Are there any more of these that might menace you?"
"I imagine so, Pilot, but I don't how many. I've always assumed as a general rule of thumb that there's two more for every one I capture."